EdwardMarr's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Toonami Collab]

Whoever made the One Punch Man parody is trash. The other ones were good though.

Sevi responds:

I hear he's a real piece of garbage, but he paid good money to be in it

[GRAVS DINER PT.1]

I liked it. But hearing you voice act every character was very distracting. Reach out on newgrounds for other voice actors. There's a lot of bad mofos on this site who are willing to help you on future productions. I really like what I'm seeing here. It has potential.

MarshmallowAnimation responds:

thank you for watching, part 2 I had a lot more help, including voices :) check it out and lmk what you think, its on my youtube channel linked below the video or in my profile

[Halloween Special!]

I enjoyed it. But it annoys the hell out of me that if you tweaked a few little things, this cartoon would have been a 5. Work on your pacing and voice acting. I see potential.

First the pacing. This cartoon should have been a little over 2 minutes tops. For example, the first 25 seconds should have been cut to 13 seconds, and 13 is pushing it. Show title card, cut to the establishing exterior shot of the house for 3 seconds tops, cut to the living room for 2 seconds, and cut to the news broadcast for 1 second. No need to pan the camera to the sofa. No need to linger on shots for too long like the tv, especially when nothing interesting is going on. The interesting part is the power going out and stuff getting crazy. Let's get to that stuff! I could keep going but, I hope you get the idea.

Second is the voice acting. Needs more emotion. For example at the 31 second mark, the "who's there" line was said with a whimper, homie. Be more crazy. Scream that shit in terror if you have to.

With all that said, looking forward to your future work. Like I said before, I see the potential.

SkittleWaffle responds:

Thank you I appreciate it! The only reason the voice acting is dull is because my friends have to come over to my house to record the lines since they don't have computers. And I live in a apartment rn so I can't really talk to loudly. But next time I'll see if I can find a solution.

[The Star Wars: Rise of Palpatine]

Very big improvement from your last cartoon! Well done, dude! Pretty funny overall. Sound design could be a little better though. For example, adding a cracking sound effect when palpatine stretches his back, and an echo/reverb effect to Yoda's voice since he's a ghost. Also, I could barely understand Mando, but it could be my speakers. Also, the pacing in between lines could be sped up just a little to make it flow better. Regardless, I enjoyed it. You're a solid scriptwriter. Your humor is clean, which is something I can't do myself. :P

Looking forward to your next project. :)
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Cashmus responds:

Thanks for the feedback man! Funny enough, I do remember wanting to find a sound effect for palpatines back crack but somehow it never ended up in the final version.

[Cloudy with a Chance of Sephiroth]

'I'm him, but better." Laughed pretty hard. Like the previous reviewer said, keep practicing on your voice acting. Or collab with someone. Also, the pacing dragged at some points. It's hard to explain but I felt the jokes had to flow better. Overall I think you have talent. +FOLLOW

Cashmus responds:

Appreciate the feedback! On a completely unrelated note, I thought your name was familiar, and then I realized I've seen your stuff on YouTube quite a while ago. I really enjoyed the videos you made back in the day so, I guess things have come around full circle now.

[How To Embarrass Your Mother]

Toy toy? Hah!

Z-Leo responds:

That was actually one of the first words I ever learned. It went from mama directly to toy toy.

[Nezni Dalibor - Zauvek]

5 stars for the backgrounds, lighting effects, and feel alone! Good music and mood. But the character designs were plain and boring. Still... I wish I could make backgrounds like that... Teach me...

DavorSopic responds:

Thank you for the comments; yes, I agree, we could work more on facial character but there was a deadline for video so didn't have really much time. About teaching backgrounds, you can contact main animator, there'e his link in description of video :)

[Patrolling Part III-Things Get E.P.I.C.!!!]

Nice. Very Nice. Wish you added more frames to some of the animation but as a fellow animator I understand. Liked the artwork. 5 stars.

Neochilds responds:

Thank you dude, I wanted to add a crap ton of things, adding more frames was on the list but time and simply wanting to move on to another project pushed this project into getting it out the door. Thank you again for taking the time to check it out.

[Kojima Leaves Konami]

Haha! Voices were spot on. Loved the dub. Very funny. But I'm telling all of you, I smell the most elaborate April Fools Joke ever. Remember that Kojima loves to troll the shit out of everyone.

JumpNJetz responds:

The idea crossed our minds when making this, but we felt like we have an interesting take on what could happen, even if it turns out to be fake. Glad you enjoyed it!
-Jetz

[Love at First A!]

Hah! Knew it was gonna end dark. Just didn't know how. NIce job!

bocodamondo responds:

hehe thanks ^^, im not really good as a writer, i tend to focus more on animation quality than on being funny ^^