EdwardMarr's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PUNCH PUNCH FOREVER!]

Fuckin A... that was fun.

[FUSHIGI REANIMATED]

Fuck I'm old...

[Toonami Collab]

Whoever made the One Punch Man parody is trash. The other ones were good though.

Sevi responds:

I hear he's a real piece of garbage, but he paid good money to be in it

[A Strand Type Animation]

Funny. Clean humor. Nice use of 3D.

[Yullis vs Pish pt.1]

Wow.

[GRAVS DINER PT.1]

I liked it. But hearing you voice act every character was very distracting. Reach out on newgrounds for other voice actors. There's a lot of bad mofos on this site who are willing to help you on future productions. I really like what I'm seeing here. It has potential.

MarshmallowAnimation responds:

thank you for watching, part 2 I had a lot more help, including voices :) check it out and lmk what you think, its on my youtube channel linked below the video or in my profile

[A Bedtime Tale]

I give you a 5 for the art, talent, and effort in the visuals. But I wished the script could match the level of skill. Boring, generic, ZZzzzzzzzzzzz.

[Halloween Special!]

I enjoyed it. But it annoys the hell out of me that if you tweaked a few little things, this cartoon would have been a 5. Work on your pacing and voice acting. I see potential.

First the pacing. This cartoon should have been a little over 2 minutes tops. For example, the first 25 seconds should have been cut to 13 seconds, and 13 is pushing it. Show title card, cut to the establishing exterior shot of the house for 3 seconds tops, cut to the living room for 2 seconds, and cut to the news broadcast for 1 second. No need to pan the camera to the sofa. No need to linger on shots for too long like the tv, especially when nothing interesting is going on. The interesting part is the power going out and stuff getting crazy. Let's get to that stuff! I could keep going but, I hope you get the idea.

Second is the voice acting. Needs more emotion. For example at the 31 second mark, the "who's there" line was said with a whimper, homie. Be more crazy. Scream that shit in terror if you have to.

With all that said, looking forward to your future work. Like I said before, I see the potential.

SkittleWaffle responds:

Thank you I appreciate it! The only reason the voice acting is dull is because my friends have to come over to my house to record the lines since they don't have computers. And I live in a apartment rn so I can't really talk to loudly. But next time I'll see if I can find a solution.

[Doctor Doctor]

I got it! I'm a genius!

[The Final Task]

This and Genryus Blade made me get into animation. Legendary.